Evaluating The Sermon: Ten Elements To Consider After You Preach
By R. Clifford Jones
The
most effective illustrations are real life experiences of the preacher. Little
captures and holds the attention of hearers more than a preacher who is willing
to share from his or her life. The practice suggests an identification with
the listening audience, and a transparency that makes for authenticity. Knowing
that self-disclosure does not come easily in today's culture, audiences tend
to be drawn to preachers who are open and candid, especially as it relates to
the struggles of life.
In
addition to stories of the preacher's personal life, those of other people,
whether living or dead, also make for good listening. Such stories engender
identification, placing the listener in the presentation. Of course, every preacher
knows that it is a breach of ministerial ethics to share from the pulpit information
that is confidential, and that even changing the names and locations of stories
to "protect the identity" of individuals is sometimes not good enough.
As such, preachers should exercise extreme caution is sharing stories of others,
doing so only when they have received permission from the parties involved.
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Should
preachers ever concoct stories to make a point? Most of my colleagues think
it is unethical to do so, while a few see nothing wrong with the practice. Like
most things in life, I guess it depends. One thing is for sure, and that is
that telling a story as though it were true when it wasn't is unethical.
In
a sense, ours is an age of story, an era of induction. Never before have people
identified as much with story. As a consequence, in this day and age some sermons
are a quilt of stories, one told after the next, with the preacher driving home
his or her point at the end. That practice is all well and good if the stories
are tied together so that the listener is not left scratching his or her head,
wondering what the stories were all about.
Was
the sermon well organized? Was the material laid out in a logical, coherent,
sequential form? Were hearers able to follow the preacher without getting lost?
Were the transitions in the sermon smooth and unobstrusive? As a teenager, I
once listened to a sermon that was nothing but a hodgepodge of loosely connected
ideas. The preacher seemed to be going in every direction all at once, and when
he was done, not a few of us had a burning headache. Sadly, many preachers,
like that one, can be indicted for confusing and confounding their hearers due
to their lack of organization.
Organization
is more than an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. What goes into each
and how the content of each develops and flows is the crux of the matter. There
must be unity, order and progression in a sermon, and transitions ought to be
smooth and imperceptible. Transitions are most powerful when they are least
noticeable. And because people tend to "listen up ahead," anticipating
the next point or act in the sermon, the preacher should package the sermon
in such a way that tension and interest are sustained. All that is said ought
to reflect Athe big idea@ of the sermon, it being understood that a sermon should
only have one "big idea."